She was born on a hardship morning
when the cold settled
into the valleys
and surrounding hills
and knuckles of the old ones
She grew like the wild grass
the way things grow when they are left alone
to grow naturally
at one point she learned manners
societies rules
they nearly destroyed her
but not quite
for she learned to dance in the rain
to take midnight walks
to savor her own soul
she learned that every moment breathes
with the opportunity to invent who you are
so she succored and she treasured
each moments lesson
and ever so slowly life claimed her
as one of its own
and she became all that she had learned;
kindness
gentleness
wisdom
like rocket fueled boosters
falling away once theyve done their job
she learned and let go
she took that wild ride to places unknown
steered only by the stars
and the universe that created them
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magical story.
ReplyDeleteVery nice!! This is my favorite line: "and she became all that she had learned".
ReplyDeleteTeresa
Bout time I wrote something huh?
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Indie
Interesting and thought-provoking ... I look forward to more of your lovely writing , Indie !
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ReplyDeleteThis poem makes me happy, I think because it reminds me of me. :o)
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a charming sentiment, well done.
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Happy December,
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Smiles.
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dance in the rain,
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love the imagery of it.
one learns visa experiences and become well rounded indeed.
ReplyDeletea job well done.
An encouraging, empowering poem and a great read. Thanks for linking it to the slam at Bluebell Books.
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awesome contribution.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully done! I love to dance in the rain and jump in puddles. I have become a better me, because of what I've learned and how I've used it. This could be my story. I loved reading it! Be blessed.
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